JonZero's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lepidoptera Galactica]

Pretty nice

I think it could of been arranged a little better. I love the feel of the slight build in the middle. You don't have to have the full version to use other samples and stuff. I've been using the demo of FL Studio for about 6 years until this past year I bought FL Studio 8 XXL boxed. Just keep building on your talent and don't stop.

Isoken responds:

Thanks for your review! ^^

You've also enlightened me on a new fact! I thought the add-ons could only be used with full FL. Well, this certainly is encouraging :D

[DJ Comet-Anticipation]

Great melody

I loved the melody and sounded nice but the drums don't really fit in with the piano verse. My suggestion would be to keep the piano pattern, recreate the other patterns because this could very well be a very nice song than it is right now.

TheComet responds:

Agreed on the drumline, I think I might go back to this one sometime soon and recreate it into a 7 minute long track, and that drumline is first up to be cleaned up into something that blends with the piano better

[Narwhals Tune]

Holy crap...

I've had this tune stuck in my head for the past week and that's why I'm leaving a review... It's so catchy!

[WS - It's Only Fair]

Nice

I like to mix to songs like this. You did a fine job here. Nothing I can really down.

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Impact]

Nice.

You make my head spin. I need to collab with you. I love your work.

[ParagonX9 - HyperioxX]

Keep 'em Pumpin'

Very nice track you got here. Not suprised, I enjoy most of works. Keep them coming!

[Bound in Chains]

Nice

This would sound a lot better if it was recorded better. Enhance the quality a little.

[The space command wants you!]

Work on samples

Mainly your drum samples. I'm not hearing the variety I was expecting. It caught my attention right away. I loved how you created the intro and I think that a break towards the end would be nice and then end it with a bang. Since it's a loop, I think this would be great for a game or what ever. Nice work done here.

perro-electric responds:

Yeah, i don't like the drums either. Maybe i redo this track.

Thanks for the feedback!

[What Is Dub? [Dubstep Remix)]

Nice

I'm kinda getting sick of hearing dub so much but this is a pretty nice track. A few words of advice. Please compress your kicks and bass samples. A lot. Maybe use the Multiband compressor plugin and maybe use a different sample for the bass when the voc comes in and I can barely hear the voc over the bass.

Also the intro to the voc is way to long, maybe cut the intro down to about a minute and bring in some new melodies or maybe a piano verse of some sort.

PS. I started making a remix of "What is Love" a while back. This song is getting me to go back and finish it lol.

musical-lechery responds:

Thanks for the review.

I hear a lot of complaints about bass either being too much or not enough. I guess it depends on peoples sound systems. Unfortunately I don't have a sub so it's hard for me to adjust the bass level for subwoofers. I admit though that I do over bass my music.

The thing about the intro is that it wasn't really meant to be an intro. I was just making a new track and decided halfway through it to throw in a remix. Maybe I should just make a solid remix? I dunno I don't really do a lot of remixing, I don't feel I have the proper resources and know how to do it very well.

But like I said, thanks for the review. And pm me if you submit your remix.

[_/Enter the Tornado\_ (demo)]

Please remaster

I like how it opens up into the strings. The drum line could be made better in the intro. I don't really like the drum sample you used for some reason. The bassline is great. This song needs more melodies like around 2:10 it should blast out with some more beats.

Remaster this and it would be sweet.

ShootingStar responds:

Cool! I will!!